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DOUGHNUTS, no more guilt!

Trans fat and health control have become the main concern for the Health Department in South Africa. One of the recent articles is found in Sowetan, the fact that some action is being implemented on problems concerning weight sets my heart at ease. This article is characterised to be good news as it particularly has got positive overtones such as that of people not having to worry about consuming mainly the ‘comfort foods’ that have a lot of fat in them. It has got relevance in today’s era whereby many children are obese due to lack of exercise and motivation; this could be attributed to the increasing technological advancements.

News24 explains the process to us more explicitly to get a better understanding concerning whether we really do agree with the implementation of these laws in South Africa. The article is effective as it engages more with the reader and the terms presented in the opening paragraph are hardly jargon related terms. The article is clear and accurate pertaining to the fact that it explains the scientific terms. The headline is an analogy pertaining to humans. The article is broken down to sub headings and the information contained within these is factual as it contains what, where, when, why and how. The genre of the article pertains to all readers and therefore the article has a value of magnitude as health is an important issue. Within the article most commas are put behind the most important words that the reader should adhere to.

Another headline to consider: Trans fat serves a sentence by law.

One, two...only two fingers left


A wave of nausea crept over me Monday morning during my habitual Internet browse for news of the art community. I came across, seemingly hundreds of articles describing the horrifying accident of a sixteen year old student, who lost eight fingers during an art class at Giles School, in Boston.

BBC news reported that, in order to create the desired sculpture of her hands, the child was instructed, by her teacher, to place her hands into a bucket filled with plaster of Paris. Shortly afterwards, the girl realised, to her horror, that she was stuck. NewsFlavor explains that up to 60C can be generated within large quantities of plaster of Paris. This means the girl sat there, hopeless, while her hands were being burnt beyond recognition.

She underwent not one, but twelve operations and was still left with only two fingers. Take another look at the photo. Can you imagine the pain that girl had to endure?

A very effective article on this incident was published by the Boston target. It was highly informative, highlighted the importance of pupil safety in schools and emphasised the school's failure to report the incident to the Health and Safety Executive.

This outrageous tale does, however, not end there. A fine of a mere £19,000 was issued to the school. This is, in my opinion, nothing but an insult to the severity of the injury that that poor girl experienced. She is crippled, maimed and forever marked by this calamity, and £19,000 is all they could give?

How could this possibly be called justice?

Is there such a thing as "perfect"?


So what is it about the clothes that I wear that makes other's within the society I am in analyse, interrogate and examine? What is it about my weight that makes people talking, questioning and asking? So what! is the answer...

In an article I recently read on one of the woman’s magazine, Marie Claire, a woman by the name of Ashley Falcon writes about how much she is a 'big girl' within her society and how she has struggled with her weight ever since she has been growing up. She then writes about the clothes that she wears in order to 'hide' her weight. The article written by Falcon is in fact very subjective and this is one tool used by a writer in order to manipulate the audience to agree with the subject matter of their respective piece of writing. One could argue that this is exactly what my piece of writing is doing to you, the reader...I am manipulating you to believe that what I am writing is true. Well let me just say that I believe that what I am writing is true and if you feel the urge to analyse it thoroughly before taking any further actions in implementing what I am about to say in your life, please do not hesitate to...by all means be my guest.

Weight is one of the things that has negative connotations within a society for females if you are ‘fat’; this excludes the African societies that mainly prefer big woman. In the western society that many of us have been bought into (yes you too) we have grown up knowing that weight is a sensitive issue and one should not be big and fat as this would mean scary looks coming your side on all corners and a certain feeling of uncomfortably. We should credit most of this to the texts written by journalists about 'the perfect body' as if this exists? No it does not! As individuals we have formulated a certain ideology of the perfect body with the help of journalistic articles. Going back to my point that the subjective matter of how a writer constructs their text will manipulate the intended host in many ways.

"Woman dress for other woman. They may dress to please the man as well, but usually it is what other woman say that clinches the decision between the short skirt and the long skirt." This is quote taken from a book by Bishop Lea and Bailey Covert (1989:4) titled, The fit or fat woman.

This quote is actually true if one thinks about it, woman are advertised to be these perfect creations and most woman would love to live up to be the perfect woman and this is where the dress code fits in. The ideology behind a scruffy dressed woman entails negative connotations and that is why a woman would always want to look her best. The book goes into explaining the issue of weight by stating that, " A woman’s appearance is not only scrutinized more carefully by other woman but often unfairly criticized by the woman herself " Bishop Lea and Bailey Covert (1989:3).

So my task for all the females out there for the rest of the year is that you must love who you are because if you do not, then you must go and dig a hole for yourself!...just joking. On the serious side; females please let us not let these journalist’s through their powerful words in magazines, manipulate us to think that there is a thing such as the ‘perfect body that exists.’ Be who you are and dress the way you feel comfortable in, easier said than done? I know! Rather implement the change now before its too late and you find yourself in hectic depression mode. One of our woman ambassadors, Oprah Winfrey once said,

“As you become more clear about who you really are, you'll be better able to
decide what is best for you - the first time around.”

So be clear about what YOU really want and what YOU feel because it is all about YOU and not the writer who tells you what to do! (Excluding myself of course). Make sure that in life you always read the fine print: You are beautiful the way you are females, so do not change to become what others want you be unless the change in itself will bring you a world of happiness, break free of the ideologies that are put out there within societies!


WATERY WONDERS...




Pic By Enathi Mqokeli

Who you are as a journalist

I am a journalist student from Rhodes university. As a journalist we are thought how to right and report on stories so as a journalist i would like to be out doors and be able to go out and research stories and find stories that happen in our country and other countries. As a journalist i want to help people whose voices cannot be heard like people who are not in a well developed country, people who have no say in how their leaders should be rule the world they live in. So its our duty as journalists to report and make sure that their stories are heard. I want to report news from my country and other countries and see what other people go through and experience the way they live. I want to be an observer .I want to do hard news in a kind of a way. As a journalist i report about important stories. As a journalist i have to attend a lot of functions to experience and observe. I am a journalist who loves something that i do, to get stories i interview people and also do interviews. Be in the field of reporting. Voice peoples views and talking to people who saw what you are writing about.

Peeling away...

a comic strip!

Pic: Anica Jansen van Vuuren

Black, white and pink...does it matter?



On Thursday’s I usually have my English language and Linguistics tutorial, and it so happens that this term we are discussing the notion of texts and how they relate to ideology. This last Thursday though, was special in a kind of way, I already have the date marked on my diary: 01 October 2009, the first day of the month and already remarkable occurrences are evolving...and so I am looking forward to what this month has in store for me.

We were doing chapter 2 on how to analyse text mainly looking at the functions and stylistic transformations. We get to the usual of discussing the week’s workpoints (something more like homework). In coming to question 2, taken from a newspaper article dealing with unrest during the apartheid era. We had to identify any stylistic transformations and describe how they inform us about the ideology that underlies each passage. This was the statement from extracted form the newspaper.

“In an explosion of unrest at least 14 blacks were shot dead in Uitenhage today. A significant number were wounded. Between 3000 and 4000 ritous blacks were on their way to white suburbs in the town when the violence broke out."

While other tutlings were analysing the text for stylistic transformations such as passivation, adverbial fronting and agent deletion. I was too busy analysing the text for the meaning it contained. One word that stroke me was the use of ‘at least’ in the first sentence. Me and my friend sitting next to me were so perplexed. At the thought of the word ‘at least’ and all the connotations embedded in this one word. Did the journalist mean there needed to be more ‘black people’ dying? That there were not enough deaths regarding the fact that there was unrest and only a few blacks died in it. ? Then I read on, only to realise that another derogatory term had been used, ‘riotous’ blacks and now this term required the use of a dictionary. The meaning of this term I came to realise is, “ involving wild and uncontrollable behaviour” and then the question arose, is this the picture the journalist is trying to convey? Wild people, angry citizens, uncontrollable individuals?

What ideological terms arise from the word ‘blacks?’ ...evil? Insane? Stupid? and violent? Why can’t we be put as positive in the eyes of a society that consists of diverse cultures? In a book written by our own freedom fighter, Nelson Mandela titled, “the struggle is my life” on page 222, in an address to rally in Durban that happened in 1990. One of the opening paragraph states, “In Natal, apartheid is a cancer in our midst, setting house against house, and eating away the precious ties that bound us together. This strife among ourselves wastes our energy and destroys our unity. My message to those of you involved in the battle of brother against brother is this: take your guns, your knifes, and your pangas, and throw them into the sea. Close down the death factories. End this war now!”

I re-read this statement and I realised that it has now been 19 years since Mandela has been stating words of encouragement within different races to get along with each other hole heartedly. Throughout the year, for Journalism, we have been touching on the issue of race. One can get the tendency to become bored with it by now, but we really need to talk and discuss this issue thoroughly. Yes, most people are not racist but when you come to think of the past you fill like digging a hole and putting yourself in it. It is a sensitive issue and the fact that it is still sensitive means we have not come to the root of the problem, as the more we talk and express and understand each other-it will become less of a sensitive issue. Firstly, Journalist’s through their articles get the privilege to achieve their view point even if they are not allowed to enquire their subjective opinions within the article.

Within society the ideology behind the notion of black people is still viewed negatively( you and I both know it) even though there might be slow progress into changing this notion...we do have white friends who understand and love us and we do the same right?
In actual fact the world may have come to peace with apartheid for now but black people, deep down still have troubled hearts that yearn for lives that once mattered but now to be remembered and mourned for. I have come to know that even though the skin to all of us, when cut, the same striking red blood is shed. This is the same skin that can have detrimental effects on a human soul, heart and life. How life can be so miserable and unpleasant when the past is bought forward, to a young black girl even post-1994. Though the rights given to us dimly exist, it is not something within the surface that matters but what is deep down. That is still difficult to talk about, troubling enough to speak about and difficult to hear about. As Albert Einstein once said, “It’s every man’s obligation to put back into the world at least the equivalent of what he takes out of it.”

LET US EMBRACE THE COLOUR DIFFERENCES AS ART, LET US NOT LOOK DOWN ON EACH OTHER! so what do you think...are you in or not?
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