Trans fat and health control have become the main concern for the Health Department in South Africa. One of the recent articles is found in Sowetan, the fact that some action is being implemented on problems concerning weight sets my heart at ease. This article is characterised to be good news as it particularly has got positive overtones such as that of people not having to worry about consuming mainly the ‘comfort foods’ that have a lot of fat in them. It has got relevance in today’s era whereby many children are obese due to lack of exercise and motivation; this could be attributed to the increasing technological advancements.News24 explains the process to us more explicitly to get a better understanding concerning whether we really do agree with the implementation of these laws in South Africa. The article is effective as it engages more with the reader and the terms presented in the opening paragraph are hardly jargon related terms. The article is clear and accurate pertaining to the fact that it explains the scientific terms. The headline is an analogy pertaining to humans. The article is broken down to sub headings and the information contained within these is factual as it contains what, where, when, why and how. The genre of the article pertains to all readers and therefore the article has a value of magnitude as health is an important issue. Within the article most commas are put behind the most important words that the reader should adhere to.
Another headline to consider: Trans fat serves a sentence by law.
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